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		<title>By: A Copywriter&#8217;s Intro to Frame-switching and Nested Storytelling &#124; FutureNow's GrokDotCom / Marketing Optimization Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator>A Copywriter&#8217;s Intro to Frame-switching and Nested Storytelling &#124; FutureNow's GrokDotCom / Marketing Optimization Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 30 Jul 2009 12:28:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] you know what to look for, this technique will start to jump out at you.  Let’s take a look at one of the more famous examples of this written by Martin Conroy: “On a beautiful late spring afternoon, twenty-five years ago, two young men graduated from the [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] you know what to look for, this technique will start to jump out at you.  Let’s take a look at one of the more famous examples of this written by Martin Conroy: “On a beautiful late spring afternoon, twenty-five years ago, two young men graduated from the [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Joe Trevison</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joe Trevison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Jun 2007 02:06:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That ad breaks all the rules of copy and succeeds. That shows you that the rules can be broken and results greater than every.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That ad breaks all the rules of copy and succeeds. That shows you that the rules can be broken and results greater than every.</p>
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		<title>By: How Master Copywriters &#8220;Think&#8221; &#124; The Copywriter&#8217;s Grab Bag</title>
		<link>http://kenmccarthy.com/blog/2006/12/23/martin-controy-did-he-write-the-greatest-direct-mail-letter-of-all-time/comment-page-1/#comment-5643</link>
		<dc:creator>How Master Copywriters &#8220;Think&#8221; &#124; The Copywriter&#8217;s Grab Bag</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 23 Jun 2007 19:54:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Doug D'Anna</title>
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		<dc:creator>Doug D'Anna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Jan 2007 18:40:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Since Ken mentioned my name here, I thought I would pipe in with my own two cents regarding Mr. Lodge&#039;s comments. 

The fact is, there is much to be learned from looking at classic sales letters.  

The insights Ken offers in his blog are very valuable since we all look at these letters in different ways. 

I don&#039;t know about you, but I&#039;ve had Martin Conroy&#039;s letter in my file for many years. 

Yet, the fact that Ken mentioned it here in his blog has given me reason to go back to my file and look at this letter in a whole new way. 

The big ah-ha that Ken has directed me to here is in the last line of the letter, specifically, Conroy&#039;s last line finale...

&quot;I cannot promise you that success will be instantly yours if you start reading The Wall Street Journal. 

&quot;But I can guarantee that you will find The Journal always interesing, always reliable, and always useful.&quot;

So while Ken sees a plain talk finale, I see a great and believable guarantee that assures leadership and trust.

But--and this is an important point--I would have never  seen it if Ken didn&#039;t direct me back to that letter and that line in particular.  

There is much to be learned by looking back at classic sales letters.  Thank you Ken for giving us a fresh new look on this one.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Since Ken mentioned my name here, I thought I would pipe in with my own two cents regarding Mr. Lodge&#8217;s comments. </p>
<p>The fact is, there is much to be learned from looking at classic sales letters.  </p>
<p>The insights Ken offers in his blog are very valuable since we all look at these letters in different ways. </p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know about you, but I&#8217;ve had Martin Conroy&#8217;s letter in my file for many years. </p>
<p>Yet, the fact that Ken mentioned it here in his blog has given me reason to go back to my file and look at this letter in a whole new way. </p>
<p>The big ah-ha that Ken has directed me to here is in the last line of the letter, specifically, Conroy&#8217;s last line finale&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8220;I cannot promise you that success will be instantly yours if you start reading The Wall Street Journal. </p>
<p>&#8220;But I can guarantee that you will find The Journal always interesing, always reliable, and always useful.&#8221;</p>
<p>So while Ken sees a plain talk finale, I see a great and believable guarantee that assures leadership and trust.</p>
<p>But&#8211;and this is an important point&#8211;I would have never  seen it if Ken didn&#8217;t direct me back to that letter and that line in particular.  </p>
<p>There is much to be learned by looking back at classic sales letters.  Thank you Ken for giving us a fresh new look on this one.</p>
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		<title>By: Swans G Paul</title>
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		<dc:creator>Swans G Paul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jan 2007 17:53:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Who wants to get a copy of &quot; The Story Of Two Men Who Fought In The Civil War&quot;?

Well, in my previous post, I gave the title of the book, and I said that it could be found on Ebay.

I even gave the page number.

Now, I have the book and the ad. My only problem is: &quot;Would it be ok to post a copy of this letter on this blog?&quot;

If it&#039;s legally ok, then I can return and type up the ad (without the illustration) of course.

Do you think it&#039;s ok to post the ad?

Swans G Paul
www.magazine.instantresultsadvertising.com</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Who wants to get a copy of &#8221; The Story Of Two Men Who Fought In The Civil War&#8221;?</p>
<p>Well, in my previous post, I gave the title of the book, and I said that it could be found on Ebay.</p>
<p>I even gave the page number.</p>
<p>Now, I have the book and the ad. My only problem is: &#8220;Would it be ok to post a copy of this letter on this blog?&#8221;</p>
<p>If it&#8217;s legally ok, then I can return and type up the ad (without the illustration) of course.</p>
<p>Do you think it&#8217;s ok to post the ad?</p>
<p>Swans G Paul<br />
<a href="http://www.magazine.instantresultsadvertising.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.magazine.instantresultsadvertising.com</a></p>
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		<title>By: Derek Naylor</title>
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		<dc:creator>Derek Naylor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Jan 2007 17:03:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ken,

As you know, copy is only part of the equation.  Since I have never received this letter personally, (am I the only one in the U.S.?) I am curious if anybody knows what type of package this was mailed in and what list they mailed to?

Regardless, it is a great letter and obviously worked very well.  In the days of long copy magalogs, etc. it&#039;s refreshing to see letters like this and Halbert&#039;s &quot;Coat of Arms&quot; letter that are short, sweet and most of all, EFFECTIVE!

Thanks for everything Ken!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ken,</p>
<p>As you know, copy is only part of the equation.  Since I have never received this letter personally, (am I the only one in the U.S.?) I am curious if anybody knows what type of package this was mailed in and what list they mailed to?</p>
<p>Regardless, it is a great letter and obviously worked very well.  In the days of long copy magalogs, etc. it&#8217;s refreshing to see letters like this and Halbert&#8217;s &#8220;Coat of Arms&#8221; letter that are short, sweet and most of all, EFFECTIVE!</p>
<p>Thanks for everything Ken!</p>
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		<title>By: Ed Osworth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ed Osworth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Dec 2006 18:53:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Does anyone have a link to the &quot;The Story Of Two Men Who Fought In The Civil War&quot; letter Daniel Lewis referred to. I tried Google and lots of other places but wasn&#039;t able to locate it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Does anyone have a link to the &#8220;The Story Of Two Men Who Fought In The Civil War&#8221; letter Daniel Lewis referred to. I tried Google and lots of other places but wasn&#8217;t able to locate it.</p>
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		<title>By: Harold</title>
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		<dc:creator>Harold</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Dec 2006 18:15:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Ken, and thank you for sharing this very interesting and I&#039;m sure also valuable insight. Martin really does entice the reader (well at least me) to want to continue reading.  

It has triggered some thots on what a great copy ad is for me.  

I also want to comment regarding your sharing about the statement by Doug D Anna - that &quot;Copywriting is building a bridge from the prospect to your product, and not the other way round.&quot; 

This is really great food for thot! I&#039;m definitely gonna scrutinise how i can model what I write after these great writers! Thanks a million!  

Merry Christmas, and Blue Skies Always!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Ken, and thank you for sharing this very interesting and I&#8217;m sure also valuable insight. Martin really does entice the reader (well at least me) to want to continue reading.  </p>
<p>It has triggered some thots on what a great copy ad is for me.  </p>
<p>I also want to comment regarding your sharing about the statement by Doug D Anna &#8211; that &#8220;Copywriting is building a bridge from the prospect to your product, and not the other way round.&#8221; </p>
<p>This is really great food for thot! I&#8217;m definitely gonna scrutinise how i can model what I write after these great writers! Thanks a million!  </p>
<p>Merry Christmas, and Blue Skies Always!</p>
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		<title>By: Ken McCarthy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ken McCarthy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Dec 2006 05:06:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;But in my case, as an advertising copywriter, itâ€™s quite hard to find a premise, and then equate the premise to the service I am providingâ€¦&quot;

It may be hard, but that&#039;s the art. 

I had a long talk with Doug D&#039;Anna about 
this very point recently. He put it this way: 

&quot;Copywriting is not building a bridge from your product to the prospect. It&#039;s building a bridge from the prospect to your product. That may seem obvious, but 99% of copywriters get this wrong.&quot;

Who is Doug D&#039;Anna? 

Like Gary Bencivenga, the big mail order publishers like Philips and KCI pay Doug $25,000 a letter plus 5 cents for every letter mailed which puts Doug in a class way beyond the &quot;usual suspects&quot; who are mentioned when it comes to copywriting. 

(You can look Doug up in &quot;Who&#039;s Charging What?&quot; - a print resource for the direct marketing industry.) 

BTW, Doug has made himself available as a mentor to members of the System Club... It&#039;s the only contact he has with the Internet marketing world for the time being. 

http://www.thesystemclub.com/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;But in my case, as an advertising copywriter, itâ€™s quite hard to find a premise, and then equate the premise to the service I am providingâ€¦&#8221;</p>
<p>It may be hard, but that&#8217;s the art. </p>
<p>I had a long talk with Doug D&#8217;Anna about<br />
this very point recently. He put it this way: </p>
<p>&#8220;Copywriting is not building a bridge from your product to the prospect. It&#8217;s building a bridge from the prospect to your product. That may seem obvious, but 99% of copywriters get this wrong.&#8221;</p>
<p>Who is Doug D&#8217;Anna? </p>
<p>Like Gary Bencivenga, the big mail order publishers like Philips and KCI pay Doug $25,000 a letter plus 5 cents for every letter mailed which puts Doug in a class way beyond the &#8220;usual suspects&#8221; who are mentioned when it comes to copywriting. </p>
<p>(You can look Doug up in &#8220;Who&#8217;s Charging What?&#8221; &#8211; a print resource for the direct marketing industry.) </p>
<p>BTW, Doug has made himself available as a mentor to members of the System Club&#8230; It&#8217;s the only contact he has with the Internet marketing world for the time being. </p>
<p><a href="http://www.thesystemclub.com/" rel="nofollow">http://www.thesystemclub.com/</a></p>
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		<title>By: Harrace</title>
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		<dc:creator>Harrace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Dec 2006 03:30:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am also teaching copywriting in Asia and I found this sales letter one of the greatest pieces I&#039;ve ever read!

By the way, Wall Street Journal has been sending me complimentary copies to my Hong Kong office since two months ago and it&#039;s a nice read to get updated business stories. This is an example of offering free trial to targeted customers. But I&#039;m not sure when they will stop sending me the free copies.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am also teaching copywriting in Asia and I found this sales letter one of the greatest pieces I&#8217;ve ever read!</p>
<p>By the way, Wall Street Journal has been sending me complimentary copies to my Hong Kong office since two months ago and it&#8217;s a nice read to get updated business stories. This is an example of offering free trial to targeted customers. But I&#8217;m not sure when they will stop sending me the free copies.</p>
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